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« on: December 15, 2013, 01:44:43 PM »

Hi everyone,

After a few weeks of slogging, I finally got my website almost perfect. I'm still waiting for the images from the photoshoot, but It's pretty much done.

Please give it a looksy. BONUS POINTS for anyone who finds a typo (I hate them soooo much!).

Companion for Women.com

Love ya,

Rhett
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« Reply #1 on: December 15, 2013, 07:31:05 PM »

Hi Rhett and welcome. Just a note: it would be a good idea to post an intro in that section.

I just read your website. All in all, you did a very nice job. It looks nice, is attractive, and presents you well. There was just one statement that you may want to consider removing, and that is:

"And yes, in the research to develop this website, all I have found are underwear models who market themselves the way that men might seek out an escort for themselves."

Why?  Well, it comes across as criticizing the competition. Here on CdM, there are lots of classy gentlemen. And most of the women here have actually hired escorts. Many have hired more than one. We know for a fact that not all of them are just underwear models. While I'm a 'one companion woman,' many of the ladies here like to see more than one gentlemen. But when someone new comes in and says something that seems critical of the other men, that can be a turn off. Ladies are pretty loyal to their companions. I don't think you meant it to be that way, but it's easy to interpret it that way, and that can hurt your chances. Therefore,  even though it's a tiny part of your website, my suggestion to remove it. You want to impress people with what you have to offer, not by making other men look bad. I hope this doesn't hurt your feelings; your website is truly very nice.

Looking forward to seeing your intro.


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« Reply #2 on: December 17, 2013, 01:25:57 AM »

My intro is in the Introductions section!

Point taken!

..and my feelings are not hurt at all. That was kind of catty of me, no?

I will take that part out because it just makes me look like I'm using some kind of superiority play to elevate my status when I truly understand that I am a "flavor" just like anyone else in this world. Some guys describe themselves as breasts or butt or leg men and anything less than their vision of perfection is invisible to them. Women have their own attractions that are "must haves" in any man they put effort into (and that's an itch that should always be scratched!). I believe in people getting everything they want.

I think that was the first time on any type of social media that I have actually been a "spelling nazi!"

I actually remember the very moment I wrote that! I found a website of a (and I have no problem saying this) GORGEOUS guy who was putting himself out there as a new male escort yet he really couldn't spell at all. After this message, Quinn, I spent about ten minutes trying to find his website again only realize how earnest he was being in his posts. There was a vulnerability about what he was writing that I know I'm definitely attracted to in women. Sadly, his site is from 2010 with no updates so it's impossible to know how far he's come.

Thank you, Quinn. I am gladly humbled by your feedback and look forward to more insight.

<3 Rhett
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« Reply #3 on: December 17, 2013, 05:38:15 PM »

(and that's an itch that should always be scratched!). I believe in people getting everything they want.
<3 Rhett

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« Reply #4 on: December 23, 2013, 10:45:28 PM »

Nice site,  I like the layout and design. 

One little critique and I hope I'm not being too harsh - though I enjoyed the "Saving the City" feature -  fiction, yes?  I would put the writings on a different page marked Writings, or some such.   Just my taste.  Also perhaps the idea of an encounter with a gun involved may make some people nervous? 
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« Reply #5 on: January 04, 2014, 09:22:53 PM »

the idea of an encounter with a gun involved may make some people nervous? 

Yeah, I got a few responses about that. I was on my website doing a bit of updating and was contemplating taking it down. Instead, I wrote a blog post! I hope it better clarifies my intentions with such a provoking fantasy.

My article about honoring fantasies might explain where I was at that moment.

Thanks so much for the critique! I totally understand where you are coming from.
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« Reply #6 on: January 06, 2014, 12:29:12 AM »

Very  welcome...  oh!   Read the explanation now, too.   That sums it up and in all I'm very happy you left it -  you should be yourself - and the explanation should take care of anyone having doubts.

Though....

still... waiting...for...picture...gallery.  :D
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