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« on: February 07, 2011, 03:40:37 PM »

Hi Guys I have noticed that most of my fellow male escorts write quite a lot about themselves in their About me sections....
Now i havent really done that on my webpage as i only give the necessary information about myself in short descriptions... i have this certain problem i want to explain, everytime i write a real text about myself with full sentences i read it over & over again and even if i like it at first, it starts to annoy me after a while and i take it out from my website again LOL what do you think & i wanna ask the ladies opinion as well, do i really need to write a text about myself or is it OK the way it is now ??? i wanna add that so far i had only asian women as my customers and when i asked them they didnt seem annoyed by it but then again most of them didnt book me for a lot of CHATTING neither if u know what i mean lol . why western women hardly contact me or is it because im not THAT musculous like most other male escorts & that means im strictly asian womens type?or is my website just not good enough yet? i would appreciate if u could send me your honest opinions....whether here or in private i dont mind! :)
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« Reply #1 on: February 08, 2011, 07:09:23 AM »

Advice, anyone ?

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« Reply #2 on: February 08, 2011, 07:23:40 AM »

VAL,

Your website is your main marketing tool. You need to get a sense across of who you are and why a lady should book you. So the About page has to somehow capture who you are and that can't generally be done with bullet points.
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« Reply #3 on: February 08, 2011, 08:02:08 AM »

Thanks Alex, so i should better come up with some thinq creative then.
It's just that i find it so hard to give an accurate description of myself in only
A FEW sentences!!! I will always feel like somethinq is missing &  thats why i
left it completely away until now ! so you think those "bullet points" are
not an adequate replacement.......principally agree but my standpoint also
is, IF i come up with a story about myself, it must reflects my character 100 % properly.....

Does one have to be a GENIOUS writer really to accurately present one's character in only a few sentences ?

Any other suggestions by anyone?
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« Reply #4 on: February 08, 2011, 08:24:08 AM »

Well if you are not good in writing it down yourself, list your points up and ask for someone to do the text editing?
As long it reflects who you are & what kind of escort you want to be, that's ok.
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« Reply #5 on: February 08, 2011, 08:37:24 AM »

Thanks for your suggestion, Julien,
but that idea i must kindly reject lol .
Hiring someone else to do it for you
would always end up in some average
blablabla because they just cannot FEEL
who you are unless they are magic !
Find me someone like that and i will consider it  /LOL
So unless that, one definitely needs to come up with his
own words... or better say nothing at all !
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« Reply #6 on: February 08, 2011, 08:46:16 AM »

Val,
I don't think that Julien was suggesting that you have someone come up with who you are. He was only suggesting that if you are not comfortable editing it yourself than sit down with someone and tell them about yourself and what you would like to come through on your "about me" page.
I personally like to read about a gentleman. It helps me to know omega is someone that I want to contact to learn more about. I would say that you need to have more about yourself than bulletins for us ladies to be able to get a feel for who you are.

Good Luck.  :)

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« Reply #7 on: February 08, 2011, 08:58:41 AM »

All right, now i have it writtenly confirmed by Lady Annette haha .

That means i cannot afford to be lazy and MUST come up
with a text about myself if i wanna be more successful and
access to all kind of ladies not just the ones who are looking
for xxx only ....

More Advice always welcome   :D

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« Reply #8 on: February 08, 2011, 09:46:34 AM »

Val,
You asked for the ladies to give there advice as well. So I did. I wasn't going to at all, but then I read how rudely you responded to Julien when he was giving advice that was asked for. Like someone said in a different post if someone doesn't want advice than don't ask for it, but when you do why would you then get defensive and rude about what they have suggested. I don't understand that type of thinking. As far as your comment back to me, I don't know if you were trying to be funny, but you came across as a smarta**.
You asked about your page and I told you what I thought.

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« Reply #9 on: February 08, 2011, 09:58:12 AM »

Excuse me for asking, Annette, but

what did you smoke LOL !

Neither was i being rude to Julien as
i'm sure everythinq is perfectly fine
between him & me,

nor did i not appreciate yours or his entry .

What you consider to be rude & smartass,
is obviously YOUR perception ....
but i"m sure most people, including Julien,
wouldnt have a problem with what i wrote
as i didnt disrespect ANYONE!
 
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« Reply #10 on: February 08, 2011, 10:01:18 AM »

Val

I would like to also suggest you take into consideration what type of client you wish to attract, I have had this discussion with another Companion and he considers this very important.

Getting someone to write your copy can be money well spent.  These people are professionals who manage to put down exactly what you are trying to say and can help you project the image you want.

Just my 2 cents.....

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« Reply #11 on: February 08, 2011, 10:17:47 AM »

Thank you so much Bel,

I DO believe that there are people out there who can write MUCH better than me, but
my concern is that they wouldnt be able to describe my character in an accurate way... isnt writing an ART itself & ART is always connected with feeling and heart and if these professional writer dont know anything about me, how can they put the proper feeling into the words they should write ?

Hugs & Kisses for all the Ladies here and Shakehands with my fellow escorts LOL

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« Reply #12 on: February 08, 2011, 10:37:51 AM »

Yes, it is an art Val, but that's what they are...artists.  Trust me I've seen them at work and they are good.  I am sure some guys here can point you in the right direction....should you wish.

Many of the ladies on here have seen many escorts and it is important to listen to the advice given, especially if asked for.  Ladies offer advice from a perspective of knowing what we all want to see...... *Bel ducks her head for fear of having something thrown at her*

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« Reply #13 on: February 08, 2011, 11:18:29 AM »

Excuse me for asking, Annette, but
what did you smoke LOL !
Neither was i being rude to Julien as 
i'm sure everythinq is perfectly fine
between him & me,
nor did i not appreciate yours or his entry .
What you consider to be rude & smartass,
is obviously YOUR perception ....
but i"m sure most people, including Julien,
wouldnt have a problem with what i wrote
as i didnt disrespect ANYONE!
 
Val

Sorry to say so Val, but I do have a problem with the amount of disrespect you show in your answers here.
As you say correctly, writing is an art. Think of that even when you write posts on this forum. Because they tell even more "About You" than your website may.

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« Reply #14 on: February 08, 2011, 11:19:18 AM »

*Bel ducks her head for fear of having something thrown at her*

Bel x
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Bel he can throw, but he doesn't make contact.  :)

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